10-21-2014, 05:50 AM
The trouble with all those I am thes is that it becomes difficult to differentiate one line from another and they look interchangeable, as here
I am the shadows in the dark
I am the whispers of your past
and that's often because they are
I am the thunder in your heart
I am the anger in your veins
The repetition of soon in the final verse could be avoided too
I am the shadows in the dark
I am the whispers of your past
and that's often because they are
I am the thunder in your heart
I am the anger in your veins
The repetition of soon in the final verse could be avoided too
Before criticising a person try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise that person, you are a mile away.... and you have their shoes.