Elevator Music

[phacade]

The doors kissed to mark the start - a great way to start this piece.
of another trip to the ground floor. - not sure how I feel about starting the second line with "of"
Soft jazz battles with the burlap silence - great.
of a man and woman alone together. - again with "of" at the start
Thoughts stay home to hum, tap, and sigh - I like it
at the sight of another missed opportunity. - I like the sentiment, but maybe reword this last line.