She Will Return

[arbitraryarmor]

Footsteps fade,
Imprints stay.
Blemishes;
they cover my heart.
They keep our love alive
Even when we’re apart.
Until we are together
the blemishes stay.
No change in weather.
Storms rage inside my mind
until
        our
               fingers
                            are
                                   intertwined.

The first two lines are somewhat mismatched from the rest of the poem, as others have noticed. Also, besides the original message of "we're unhappy while apart", there's no development, no expansion on what you started. I would suggest trying to go out of your way to avoid overly cliched words, simply because anything remotely cliche will feel completely unoriginal regardless of how much it means to you.