10-19-2014, 01:21 PM
billy,
--Stanza is a valid, used term in songs.
I'm a rhapsody in blue! i bet you're really a cliche
--yes. The cliche is an angsty teen-aged female victim of earlier abuse. But is that a problem?
On verse 3, the ellipses make it grammatical. I can skip that?
On verse 4--you're right, and I need to fix that.
"one thing i could never fathom about lyrics was why nearly all of them were cliche rich"--because those lyrics are crappy. Just like mine when I use a cliche.
There's a world where
No one cares! again it feels very cliche
--I'm missing the cliche, but I trust you.
--Stanza is a valid, used term in songs.
I'm a rhapsody in blue! i bet you're really a cliche
--yes. The cliche is an angsty teen-aged female victim of earlier abuse. But is that a problem?
On verse 3, the ellipses make it grammatical. I can skip that?
On verse 4--you're right, and I need to fix that.
"one thing i could never fathom about lyrics was why nearly all of them were cliche rich"--because those lyrics are crappy. Just like mine when I use a cliche.
There's a world where
No one cares! again it feels very cliche
--I'm missing the cliche, but I trust you.
A yak is normal.