10-18-2014, 08:42 AM
(10-16-2014, 01:48 PM)Erthona Wrote: Keith,Hi Dale
Evidently there is an intent to this, as the two stanzas are juxtaposed to one another by the introduction of the "or". The why it is done completely bypasses me. If it is simply a choice, I would choose the first one, as it is a better image than the second one.
Dale
It was a choice and you made it
so I did some work, Thank you, Keith
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