Fragile
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Revised draft:

Talking to you is like tiptoeing around
a priceless collection of glass miniatures,
in my heavy work boots,
caked with dirt.

My words are like my hands,
calloused and clumsy,
sandpaper on a skinned peach.

Your hollow bird bones
Shatter against my caging arms,
frenzied for freedom.

If I could bathe in Holy water,
soak and be reborn soft,
you could lie in my love,
float like a cloud in a dream.




Draft 1:
Talking to you is like tiptoeing around
A priceless collection of glass miniatures
In my heavy work boots,
Caked with dirt.

My words are like my hands,
Calloused and clumsy.
Sandpaper on a skinned peach.

I embrace you and your hollow bird bones
Shatter against the cage of my arms,
Frenzied for freedom.

If I could bathe in holy water,
Soak and be reborn soft,
You could lie in my love,
Float like a cloud in a dream.
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Fragile - by stevesteve - 10-17-2014, 03:03 PM
RE: Fragile - by cidermaid - 10-17-2014, 05:00 PM
RE: Fragile - by stevesteve - 10-18-2014, 01:19 AM



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