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Just Like Jehovah
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10-17-2014, 05:51 AM
Thanks, Mercedes. I'm not a stickler for metre and I prefer loose rhymes, near rhymes, whatever they're called this week. But anyhow, I didn't like the title or the last 2 lines so I've changed them and, I suppose, the general thrust of the poem too.
Before criticising a person try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise that person, you are a mile away.... and you have their shoes.
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Just Like Jehovah - by ray - 10-16-2014, 05:48 PM
RE: What's The Odds? - by just mercedes - 10-17-2014, 05:37 AM
RE: Just Like Jehovah - by ray - 10-17-2014, 05:51 AM
RE: Just Like Jehovah - by newsclippings - 10-17-2014, 09:09 AM
RE: Just Like Jehovah - by ray - 10-17-2014, 09:38 PM
RE: Just Like Jehovah - by Erthona - 10-17-2014, 11:57 AM
RE: Just Like Jehovah - by ray - 10-17-2014, 09:51 PM
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