10-14-2014, 05:21 PM
Put up another edit.
I am begining to hate this poem. Anyone else ever seen a great title / idea in someone elses work and thought hey that's got me going on an idea of how I could re- work this...dashed out what you had in mind...thinking this is working out okay...and then hit a wall...because actually it doesn't work at all?
it has become a bit of a mission in writing disciple to do these edits and make this idea work, but I fear I have killed it in the process.
Thank you to those who have offered crit so far, I appreciate your time to read and crit.
AJ.
I am begining to hate this poem. Anyone else ever seen a great title / idea in someone elses work and thought hey that's got me going on an idea of how I could re- work this...dashed out what you had in mind...thinking this is working out okay...and then hit a wall...because actually it doesn't work at all?
it has become a bit of a mission in writing disciple to do these edits and make this idea work, but I fear I have killed it in the process.
Thank you to those who have offered crit so far, I appreciate your time to read and crit.
AJ.