restless

[billy]

for me the first line does the poem no favours. nore does the first line of the 2nd stanza.

restless
I've got this indecision . . .
The power's out
in the kitchen
on my mountain.

I decided
I'd go and check
the itchy sidewalk 
for a cigarette.



And I'd be right back . . .



How could I just
lose your love that way? no need for that way as you don't tell us what way, which is okay because as the reader we can add our own thoughts to the poem. [that way] is redundant
But I did.
That's what I did today.