10-13-2014, 04:10 PM
Quote:I wanted to make the title, itself, feel restless. It doesn't want to be where it is, but rather wants to be a line higher, and it doesn't want to be dropped, it wants to be capped. As is, the title has to worry that readers will mistake it for being part of the poem.
The planets aligned for a moment as I realized the absolute genius that your explanation for the title is.
Bravo.

