10-13-2014, 03:35 PM
"The name you chose for this written work is "restless". I'm assuming this was a deliberately under-cased "r", which I find interesting. How do you feel this detail within the title furthers the overall cogency of the poem?"
I wanted to make the title, itself, feel restless. It doesn't want to be where it is, but rather wants to be a line higher, and it doesn't want to be dropped, it wants to be capped. As is, the title has to worry that readers will mistake it for being part of the poem.
I wanted to make the title, itself, feel restless. It doesn't want to be where it is, but rather wants to be a line higher, and it doesn't want to be dropped, it wants to be capped. As is, the title has to worry that readers will mistake it for being part of the poem.
A yak is normal.