10-11-2014, 09:21 AM
When I first read this, I saw a child's kite. I think the suggestion to make this a haibun is excellent - or even a tanka, with the final lines showing what happened next, making clear the double meaning of 'kite'.
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RE: haiku - by maximumjake - 10-09-2014, 12:50 PM
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