10-09-2014, 07:37 AM
(10-09-2014, 01:40 AM)billy Wrote: i like the poem, though the first two words [wind whispers] makes it seem like the the wind is asking to be chased, yet i want to see the leaves being chased by the windBilly, you are right on both counts. The leaves are being chased by the wind. The wind suggests it "oughta" be the other way round.
(10-06-2014, 12:38 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: wind whispers to burnt leaves,
" I'm incredible,
you oughta be chasing me".
Paul
