10-08-2014, 06:31 AM
Very relatable poem for many of us have had at least one family member befall by cancer. It is very important to keep your head up and stay strong in times such as these. I commend you for your strength in these tough times. I agree the poem itself is a little wordy the flow can be hard to follow at points. Try to find a few words to cover a group of your words you have throughout. To help create a little more imagery. All in all has great potential to be an amazing motivational poem. At this stage its a little bit of a motivational statement. Thank you for your post spoke to my heart deeply.