10-08-2014, 06:22 AM
I really enjoyed this poem. I love the set up for the seemed missed opertunity. From the doors closing like a lost chance. To the kiss of there touch which brings for a intimate meaning. To making the point of going back to the ground floor. Seems to me like going back to the beginning like starting over. The flow all the way towards the statement of a "missed opertunity" let's me understand how severe in ones heart this missed chance really was. I really like the burlaps silence being someone who has worked with alot of materials i know burlap can be seemingly rough against the skin unlike silk or cotton. Helps me understand how truly toufh the silence itself was. Thank you for your post.