Whiskey

[ellajam]

Thanks, Ella. You're one of the posters I tend to most agree with. Not sure to do with this one. If I can save it or if I scrap it at altogether It's in a batch of stuff I'm getting ready to send out. I've rewritten it four or five times (the first was much longer, and probably less effective.) I hate when a poem slides out from under me. Might be the case on this one. 

Nooooo, if you agree with me you'll love enough to perfect it, if not now, later. Maybe someone else will say something that will click for you. Don't scrap it, or if you do send your trashcan my way.