10-08-2014, 12:46 AM
Thanks, Ella. You're one of the posters I tend to most agree with. Not sure to do with this one. If I can save it or if I scrap it at altogether It's in a batch of stuff I'm getting ready to send out. I've rewritten it four or five times (the first was much longer, and probably less effective.) I hate when a poem slides out from under me. Might be the case on this one.