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[tectak]

thank you.

personally i don't think poetry needs to be conventional always. i consider poetry to be an art and i like to experiment.

Of course, you are right...but not capitalising or using punctuation is not experimental any more than is putting a prism in a beam of light and being surprised by the spectrum. It has been done before.
Your poetry is the art and the experiment...your poetry is good. As an experiment, try using the established WORKABLE advantages which developed language brings. You may find that you have a whole new set of tools. No more on this unless in the discussion forum...but frankly, it is boringly deja vu.
Best,
tectak