10-07-2014, 09:03 AM
If you add more, don't add anything to the end! I love how it came together for me in the last line, and brought a nice smile to my face.
I think the first and last lines are the strongest, and I like the length, but the lines in between don't have the same magic for me.
I also didn't immediately understand "burlap silence", but do like it now that you've explained. I miss a lot though so don't worry if I didn't get it
I think the first and last lines are the strongest, and I like the length, but the lines in between don't have the same magic for me.
I also didn't immediately understand "burlap silence", but do like it now that you've explained. I miss a lot though so don't worry if I didn't get it