10-07-2014, 08:46 AM
(10-06-2014, 07:48 PM)tomoffing Wrote: Powerful sneeze-Something about this I like, though rhyme isn't used much in haiku. Also - pollen is not seeds. Maybe something like this ~
wind stirred seeds
lift tissue sales.
any guidance appreciated, i'm bran new to anything short form.
powerful sneeze
wind-stirred dust
tissue sales lift
