10-07-2014, 08:36 AM
(10-07-2014, 12:28 AM)t.arcadius Wrote: I agree that you seem to be trying to depict the growth of a person from one stage to another, but I also agree that the evolution is difficult to track. I don't feel as though I know much more about this woman after reading the poem than I did before.Sometimes I find it hard to put in all the lines that can give the reader the full details of the character in the poem.
My favourite part was "her powerful pose blew them off". Posture is very important for confidence and strength, and our physical and emotional states are often very linked and can have causal effects in both direction. Thanks!