10-07-2014, 07:24 AM
Quite good for what it is. Unfortunately I think that it's the the Bukowski-esque justification of alcoholism is just a bit overdone nowadays. We already know what it's like to have our heart broken, we know what it's like to want to have wine for breakfast. I want to know how it feels to wake up from a week-long bender.
I think you could rework this, asking yourself "what does it actually feel like to have wine for breakfast?"
I think you could rework this, asking yourself "what does it actually feel like to have wine for breakfast?"