Motif

[tectak]

thank you. the lack of punctuation and uppercase are deliberate. i like the suggestions. i will come back with an edit.

Why...to what purpose...what advantage...what exceptional or unique point does inadequacy make? Are you rebellious or incompetant? Is it clever to be lacking? How does the reader know which you are? Do you care and if you do not then why should I? Do you want support from the "cans" or from the "can nots"? From those who care or from those who do not? Do you want to improve or do you want to stagnate? Do you want to be unique or one of the crowd? Ah...I get it! Yep. That's novel. DELIBERATELY not punctuating or capitalising correctly...sheesh... I wish I'd thought of that.
Best,
tectak
Oh, sorry, forgot the crit. It is good but needs some punctuation and capitalising to make it great...but what do I know?

Best,
tectak