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Benefit of the Doubt
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10-06-2014, 05:14 AM
Hi wjames, I'm with billy on this one-- I love the concept and I like what's already there, but want it to be developed more! It feels like a cliffhanger... Maybe another stanza from grown-up-poet perspective? A clever jibe at unsupportive fam? Just an idea. =]
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Benefit of the Doubt - by Wjames - 10-02-2014, 09:01 AM
RE: Benefit of the Doubt - by cidermaid - 10-05-2014, 05:39 PM
RE: Benefit of the Doubt - by billy - 10-05-2014, 06:32 PM
RE: Benefit of the Doubt - by Word Weaver - 10-05-2014, 09:54 PM
RE: Benefit of the Doubt - by justcloudy - 10-06-2014, 05:14 AM
RE: Benefit of the Doubt - by Wjames - 10-07-2014, 12:31 AM
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