10-05-2014, 06:52 PM
i used to be a necrophiliac
till some rotten cunt
split on me
till some rotten cunt
split on me
okay, i have no idea why i wrote that but it's an old joke your poem provoked out of me. the poem in question;
while i like it as a quote, i think more brevity would make it stronger
it's easier to show what i suggest instead of say.
necrophilia
proving to yourself
you are alive
(10-05-2014, 01:32 PM)Lysander Gray Wrote:necrophilia
is just proving to yourself
that you are alive
