wreckless

[billy]

hi poe;

after a cursory read it felt like some words could be left out in order to tighten up the poem.  i quite enjoyed it but was looking for the why of the poem why do you live in a wreckless [reckless]void? and why are you happy being there?

I live in a wreckless void where no need for [where] void is somewhere you don't live in
faces grow on trees.
And down where no need for [and]and possibly no need for [down] as that's where root tend to be, in which case a suggestion would be to move [where] down to the next line
the roots eat soil i think this line is excellent, it creates a factual image and also work as a metaphor
In my mind, I bury my toes in i like the enjambment used here. at first glance it feels like you want to be stubborn, the next line shows us something different it shows you (the 1st person) wants to grow or perhaps spread out
her cool blackened earth. another good strong line.
Smelling the fragrant dirt where no need for [the]
autumns sweet apples are
churned and displayed 
like a promise of something true. would [real] work better than [true]? i quite like the end though i would like it tied to something more solid.