green is the color of silence

[Lysander Gray]

the landscape
drew cumulus green;
the full moon shattered,
falling in the dark night, < what? how? what shattered the moon? this is confusing imagery. if you want to keep it add another line that ties it to an idea or concept.
its pale glow
fringed the head of trees, beautiful imagery. love it! you should end this image with a fullstop to separate from the next
fireflies
in the muted sky.
my backyard was outlined
by the frayed edges
of the moon, its ghostlike images. i agree with previous posters about having the 2nd moon and changing it. this line and the previous two seem to be almost reduntant as anything that says anything new within this poem. You've said what these lines have said with the rest of the poem.
I swept the rooms;
in the woods nearby
moss steadily crept
and consumed my backyard. nice ending.

Interesting poem, though I wonder what the 'purpose' is, whether you are trying to paint a picture soley, or illuminate anything else. However I did love the imagery here.