A Love Armed

[Lysander Gray]

The world awaits a war on wars.
A black flag as a declaration
to burn all flags and declarations.
A friendship
defending itself. you can make this line stronger by changing it to ''defends''

The world awaits
a language before words love this line
that can find unarmored hearts drop the can and add an S to find so it becomes "finds"
in which to thrive; toppling pillars
of oppression and enslavement. And is unnecessary and doesnt sound good. Streamline it and also drop the full stop.
And fear.

The world awaits a love armed
to create a state of sovereigns.
A weapon of mass liberation;
a bomb that bursts into
flourishing moments. < nothing to change here.

I really enjoyed the format, concept and delivery here. But I think it could sound more powerful, more direct, which would really bring it to life.