beachcombing

[cjchaffin]

The title's not generic, it's understated. That allows the poem to stand on its own without being subject to loads of preconception. The edit is really solid -- I quite liked celadon because it's a cool word, but killing it off and having the alliteration of 'green globe' has strengthened the image considerably.
Nicely done

perhaps my next poem will be about hitting billy over the head with a celadon-glazed vase. it's a shame to waste such a cool word 

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