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beachcombing
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The title's not generic, it's understated. That allows the poem to stand on its own without being subject to loads of preconception. The edit is really solid -- I quite liked celadon because it's a cool word, but killing it off and having the alliteration of 'green globe' has strengthened the image considerably.
Nicely done 
It could be worse
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beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-01-2014, 01:41 PM
RE: beachcombing - by Leanne - 10-01-2014, 03:44 PM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-02-2014, 01:16 AM
RE: beachcombing - by rayheinrich - 10-01-2014, 04:39 PM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-02-2014, 01:22 AM
RE: beachcombing - by rayheinrich - 10-02-2014, 06:59 AM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-02-2014, 10:57 AM
RE: beachcombing - by rayheinrich - 10-02-2014, 11:46 AM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-02-2014, 12:17 PM
RE: beachcombing - by rayheinrich - 10-02-2014, 01:13 PM
RE: beachcombing - by Leanne - 10-01-2014, 04:44 PM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-02-2014, 01:24 AM
RE: beachcombing - by ellajam - 10-02-2014, 02:20 AM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-02-2014, 10:57 AM
RE: beachcombing - by billy - 10-02-2014, 03:04 PM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-02-2014, 11:45 PM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-03-2014, 02:17 PM
RE: beachcombing - by billy - 10-03-2014, 05:16 PM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-04-2014, 02:11 AM
RE: beachcombing - by rayheinrich - 10-04-2014, 12:50 AM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-04-2014, 02:18 AM
RE: beachcombing - by Leanne - 10-04-2014, 05:46 AM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-04-2014, 06:23 AM
RE: beachcombing - by rayheinrich - 10-04-2014, 02:44 PM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-04-2014, 02:48 PM
RE: beachcombing - by rayheinrich - 10-04-2014, 02:29 PM
RE: beachcombing - by billy - 10-04-2014, 03:52 PM
RE: beachcombing - by cjchaffin - 10-04-2014, 11:44 PM
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