10-03-2014, 09:04 AM
max,
post-congratulatory on your new word "sharative".
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Nice nod to T. S. Elliot.
" betwixt" what and what?
I never much liked Styx, except on "the Paradise", I just never could stomach Dennis De Young.
I think I would change "slogs" for dog, since it has to rhyme, if not I would use...
I'm assuming you mean the river not the goddess.
Very lyrical in a non-music sort of way.
Actually I have no idea what it means (so you can ignore everything I said, except about T. S. Elliot), although it is bouncy.
dale
post-congratulatory on your new word "sharative".
__________________________________________
Nice nod to T. S. Elliot.
" betwixt" what and what?
I never much liked Styx, except on "the Paradise", I just never could stomach Dennis De Young.
I think I would change "slogs" for dog, since it has to rhyme, if not I would use...
I'm assuming you mean the river not the goddess.
Very lyrical in a non-music sort of way.
Actually I have no idea what it means (so you can ignore everything I said, except about T. S. Elliot), although it is bouncy.
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.