10-02-2014, 11:30 PM
You could use punctuation differently to sort out some of what's happening in the lines. It's not hard to follow, somehow it feels elaborating without being elaborate. The details seem to be not very important.
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Dancing Muse - by Mwaba don - 10-02-2014, 05:26 PM
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