10-02-2014, 02:26 AM
(10-02-2014, 02:18 AM)Tamara Wrote:I like this, the separation of the lines made me put aside stormy night and see the other two lines. When I put the first line back again this really opened up for me into "no shelter".
![[Image: madhavan_stormynight_zps3af4964f.jpg]](http://s270.photobucket.com/user/mmj_album/media/madhavan_stormynight_zps3af4964f.jpg.html)
I enjoyed the experience and find this a sound example of white space used beautifully by filling it with a distracting and beautiful image. Thanks for posting it, inspiring.
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