10-01-2014, 01:11 PM
thank you rowen, chris.
i think i will do away with the moon in that line. but i wonder how it would read if it's something like this. i want to leave backyard as it is.
my backyard was outlined
by the frayed edges
its ghost like images.
i think i will do away with the moon in that line. but i wonder how it would read if it's something like this. i want to leave backyard as it is.
my backyard was outlined
by the frayed edges
its ghost like images.

