9.30.14 NY

9.30.14 NY

justcloudy Offline

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10-01-2014, 03:34 AM

Maybe you just need some pictures with the post!
http://www.buzzfeed.com/skarlan/the-clou...ingly?bffb&utm_term=4ldqpgp#1gu9t9g

The last line was a bit too metaphysical imo. ChristoherSea's suggestion tightened it up, but I think you can lose September since it's already in the title. Just thoughts. Thanks for the read!

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9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 09-30-2014, 10:21 PM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 09-30-2014, 10:30 PM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by Tamara - 09-30-2014, 10:36 PM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 09-30-2014, 11:10 PM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by billy - 09-30-2014, 11:37 PM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 09-30-2014, 11:38 PM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ChristopherSea - 09-30-2014, 11:44 PM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by Erthona - 10-01-2014, 12:40 AM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by justcloudy - 10-01-2014, 03:34 AM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 10-01-2014, 04:26 AM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 10-01-2014, 03:42 AM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 10-01-2014, 03:52 AM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 10-01-2014, 04:03 AM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 10-01-2014, 04:06 AM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by ellajam - 10-01-2014, 04:17 AM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by rowens - 10-01-2014, 04:21 AM

RE: 9.30.14 NY - by heslopian - 10-30-2014, 01:32 PM

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