09-30-2014, 04:41 PM
Ray-dee-Oh,
Nice love poem. Maybe some ellipses before the "and" on L1.
This is an odd little line, is it a typo, or did you mean to do that.
"you say me with your mouth
and mine with yours"
It's a fun twist. I'd leave it.
dale
Nice love poem. Maybe some ellipses before the "and" on L1.
This is an odd little line, is it a typo, or did you mean to do that.
"you say me with your mouth
and mine with yours"
It's a fun twist. I'd leave it.
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.