09-30-2014, 12:48 PM
(09-29-2014, 09:35 PM)crow Wrote: Just a quick note--if these are lyrics, if you have a tune for them, for instance, please do say. I'd love to edit them as such.This piece is not intended to be lyrical in the typical sense. It is meant to leave an impression when spoken, and give the speaker a sympathetic tone, but it isn't a song.
crow
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