dad

[haikutec]

Hi Tamara,

i guess dad's shoes would have more clarity since senryu normally does not have a title.

You are right, senryu and haiku do not have titles, but it was useful that you placed 'dad' in the subject line as it gave context to the verse.

So now you could consider inserting 'dad' straight into the poem.

Sometimes our poems go through many versions, if short verse like senryu and haiku.

Just enjoy the revision process. :-)

warm regards,

Alan