dad

[haikutec]

Hi Tamara,

large sized shoes
feet cling on to memories
you live


or for more clarity, 

slipping feet into large sized shoes
feet cling on to memories
you live

re:

large sized shoes
feet cling on to memories
you live


or for more clarity,

slipping feet into large sized shoes
feet cling on to memories
you live

I feel you can pare both versions of the first line to simply "large shoes"

Although there is memory foam for footwear nowadays, so be mindful of that interpretation, I feel you have your father's shoes (dad in the subject line of the post) bringing back memories.

You could simply say 'dad's shoes' and let the phrasal section of the haiku deal with a past memory in concrete terms?

I'll be fascinated how this subject develops, wonderful idea!

warm regards,

Alan