09-29-2014, 09:29 PM
Ben,
Would you be fine starting w just the first two lines? Right now, I don't understand them. Who is "you"? What does "breathing" mean? How is "naked form" different from "naked"?
Why do you say you're writing in iamb when you seem not to be?
Would you be fine starting w just the first two lines? Right now, I don't understand them. Who is "you"? What does "breathing" mean? How is "naked form" different from "naked"?
Why do you say you're writing in iamb when you seem not to be?
A yak is normal.