Janus

[Tamara]

After the edit, which one is better, the first one ends in a positive note:

Janus

Teak wood flowers, snowdrops
cluster on every branch,
small fragrant ones;
a blizzard without warning
on a November morning,
as if winter set in early.
You decide to leave,
crocheted leaves exhale
bleakness and leave shadows;
a white haze on the hills.
I sing a lone song,
a red-whiskered bulbul
flies out to sunshine.

or

Teak wood flowers, snowdrops
cluster on every branch,
small fragrant ones;
a blizzard without warning
on a November morning,
as if winter set in early.
You decide to leave,
crocheted leaves exhale
bleakness and leave shadows;
a white haze on the hills.