haiku

[rayheinrich]

this is just not working for me. anyone has some good suggestions?

etched on the moon
behind the clouds
my listless wandering

Possible relations:
Line two is a little strange. I am not sure how it relates to the meaning of the first line.

Here are a few possible relations:
I am the moon who is behind the clouds, where are you?
My listless wandering is illuminated (made apparent) by the moon.
My listless wandering is obscured, like the moon behind clouds.
My mother, where are you? I cannot find my home.
I am lost, hidden, only the moon knows.