Janus

Janus

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09-29-2014, 01:06 AM

Well, I do think taking them out would make the poem stronger, but it's still up to you. It's your poem.

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Janus - by Tamara - 09-28-2014, 12:40 PM

RE: Janus - by brandontoh - 09-29-2014, 12:31 AM

RE: Janus - by Tamara - 09-29-2014, 12:35 AM

RE: Janus - by brandontoh - 09-29-2014, 01:06 AM

RE: Janus - by Tamara - 09-29-2014, 01:17 AM

RE: Janus - by BenjaminShaw - 09-29-2014, 10:36 AM

RE: Janus - by Tamara - 09-29-2014, 11:09 AM

RE: Janus - by just mercedes - 09-29-2014, 01:19 PM

RE: Janus - by just mercedes - 09-29-2014, 01:20 PM

RE: Janus - by Tamara - 09-29-2014, 03:27 PM

RE: Janus - by Tamara - 09-29-2014, 05:51 PM

RE: Janus - by billy - 09-29-2014, 06:06 PM

RE: Janus - by Tamara - 09-29-2014, 06:13 PM

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