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Maturing
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09-28-2014, 08:28 PM
Hey Dale. I think we had a similar discussion on another piece. One of my tendencies (I wouldn't call it style), is to let form dissolve toward the end of a poem. I think you advised that the habit was ok, but very difficult to master. Looks like I did it again here to some extent. But as you and Tamara agree, I'm gonna rethink this one. Thanks.
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Maturing - by Tiger the Lion - 09-28-2014, 11:29 AM
RE: Maturing - by Tamara - 09-28-2014, 12:17 PM
RE: Maturing - by Tiger the Lion - 09-28-2014, 12:27 PM
RE: Maturing - by Erthona - 09-28-2014, 01:53 PM
RE: Maturing - by Tiger the Lion - 09-28-2014, 08:28 PM
RE: Maturing - by Brownlie - 09-29-2014, 07:05 AM
RE: Maturing - by Tiger the Lion - 09-29-2014, 07:31 AM
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