Maturing

[Tamara]

Maturing


I fell in love today,
and like my poet friends advised:
I put my pen away.Y

We can talk about it later.
It's too big to wrap in this paper
anyway.

pb 9-27

I wondered if this was a senryu when i first read it and it was like no to the punctuation. But as a short piece it reads well and it's concise and neat. Do you need the 'anyway' in the last line? I wonder how it would read if you bring the 'in this paper' down instead.