09-28-2014, 03:00 AM
(09-27-2014, 12:11 PM)Brownlie Wrote: I don't always do this, partly because I'm lazy and partly because I'm not very good, but you should punctuate your poem. Maybe think of it like prose and look up some grammar which is supposed to enhance meaning or enforce aesthetically pleasing stopping points and things like that.Thank you for your reply! This poem was definitely a work in progress! In my new version I tried to pay more attention to grammar, but any additional feedback would be appreciated.