liquid deception

[lanamyheart]

tumble dry and spill me out
pour me over the streets
clear poison, the most dangerous form
seeping under your skin
cleansing away the world
for eternity

I found the lines 3 and 5 contradictory. You are speaking of poison seeping under the skin and then cleansing. It's not connecting for me.  A pinch of punctuation wouldn't do harm to the poem.

Thank you for your input Tamara. I am new to this whole poetry thing, so I need all the help I can get! I started working on the grammar aspect, and the poem completely transformed!