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liquid deception
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09-27-2014, 12:11 PM
I don't always do this, partly because I'm lazy and partly because I'm not very good, but you should punctuate your poem. Maybe think of it like prose and look up some grammar which is supposed to enhance meaning or enforce aesthetically pleasing stopping points and things like that.
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liquid deception - by lanamyheart - 09-27-2014, 11:25 AM
RE: liquid deception - by Brownlie - 09-27-2014, 12:11 PM
RE: liquid deception - by lanamyheart - 09-28-2014, 03:00 AM
RE: liquid deception - by Tamara - 09-27-2014, 12:43 PM
RE: liquid deception - by lanamyheart - 09-28-2014, 02:55 AM
RE: liquid deception - by Tamara - 09-28-2014, 03:11 AM
RE: liquid deception - by billy - 09-28-2014, 05:52 PM
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