"Haiku" on a brook trout
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(09-23-2014, 06:19 AM)alatos Wrote:  I unhook
the mottled miracle
gulping in my palm. 

I have known Haiku's to be simple, Yours seems a little complicated to me. (May be the words mottled miracle).
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"Haiku" on a brook trout - by alatos - 09-23-2014, 06:19 AM
RE: "Haiku" on a brook trout - by just mercedes - 09-23-2014, 07:31 AM
RE: "Haiku" on a brook trout - by Tamara - 09-24-2014, 12:47 AM
RE: "Haiku" on a brook trout - by Magpie - 09-24-2014, 12:48 AM
RE: "Haiku" on a brook trout - by billy - 09-24-2014, 03:56 AM
RE: "Haiku" on a brook trout - by rayheinrich - 09-24-2014, 08:22 AM
RE: "Haiku" on a brook trout - by Mwaba don - 09-27-2014, 08:17 AM



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