I Know One Thing

I Know One Thing

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09-27-2014, 12:54 AM

billy: the enjambment is meant to accentuate the... dryness of the atmosphere. Not sure if that makes sense or even work. Yeah, it's best to change it.
mercedes: thanks for the feedback! Burnt paper, maybe there are secret writings on it.

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I Know One Thing - by brandontoh - 09-25-2014, 05:53 PM

RE: I Know One Thing - by billy - 09-25-2014, 06:04 PM

RE: I Know One Thing - by crow - 09-25-2014, 06:09 PM

RE: I Know One Thing - by crow - 09-25-2014, 06:10 PM

RE: I Know One Thing - by brandontoh - 09-25-2014, 06:24 PM

RE: I Know One Thing - by billy - 09-25-2014, 06:31 PM

RE: I Know One Thing - by just mercedes - 09-26-2014, 05:04 AM

RE: I Know One Thing - by brandontoh - 09-27-2014, 12:54 AM

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